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#1 OFFLINE Saintmat

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Fanboys 2011 is calling you to arms, story tellers of the community. The last year has seen a stagnant patch for the world of careers and stories, with very few threads genuinely worth the read. My Fanboy initiative is to get the tales of your manager onto the forums and to raise the quality of how the stories are told.

So to help me achieve this, I will be running a Story of the Month competition. The best three stories (and/or career threads) on the boards will be picked by myself and will go to the votes of the readers. If you win one of the monthly competitions, your story updates for the rest of the month will be published onto the featured page, displaying your work at the forefront of the Fanboy community. We'll also give you a mention in the Monthly Fanboy Round-Up, so your efforts will be duly rewarded.

So how do you write a good story? Well it’s all down to a number of factors, but the three key things to think about are:

Is it readable? - It sounds obvious, but it’s not as easy to achieve. You are in greater danger of making your career boring if you go for a story format, when you aren’t a natural writer. At the same time I’ve seen career threads that are so bare it’s not even worth paying attention to. To make a thread readable you need to be able to engage the reader and keep them interested. SDKs career thread was particularly good at doing this. It should go without saying, but spelling and grammar need to be at a good level as well.

Is it original? - No, I don’t want to hear about how you won the quadruple with Arsenal in your first season. Originality promotes interest, take for example .Meth’s career thread with St. Pauli last season (his career didn‘t get posted at Fanboys). I’d much rather pay attention to the team from the Romanian 2nd Division that won the Champions League, than your ridiculously over powered Arsenal team. Originality marks also go to the way you present your story, it could be in a diary format or it could be from the perspective of fans/journalists.

Is it well displayed?
- Display relates to the format in which you post your career. Some people prefer to illustrate it with random news items, and others prefer season reviews. It’s all down to personal taste. One bit of advice though, don’t just copy out the text from the game. Nobody wants to read that, so it’s a waste of time. Extra points go to those with a good use of graphics as well, but don’t fret about it. Just keeping the thread colourful with different font colours is usually more than enough.

This is the criteria I’ll be following when looking to pick a story to go into the public vote, as well as watching how frequently it is attended too. So if you fancy being named as the Fanboys Writer of the Month, then you’d do well to take note of the criteria. The public vote round is very simple;

No Self Voting - This will result in disqualification. You can vote for other stories, but you don’t have to either.

If we get enough entries, I’ll hold a Demo Career Thread competition at the beginning of November, before the release of the full game.

So, with that clear, get writing Fanboys!

Feel free to ask any questions if you have them.

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HALL OF FAME!

October 2010 - Dan's Eastern European Adventure (Pompey_Dan)
November 2010 - Doing It My Way (Ippo)
December 2010 - My First Fan Boys Story (Neavsey)


#2 OFFLINE Joey™

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Great idea, Matt. Hopefully you'll get some interest from our members and hopefully they'll give the staff some competition :) I personally look forward to SDK and Kevaggel's career threads this year.

#3 OFFLINE Daniel

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Good idea this, this year I think I'm actually gonna try and get a good career story going, was a bit disappointed I didn't have on last year.

#4 OFFLINE kerlonmoura

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I might give this a go! :happy:

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#5 OFFLINE timmybendiš

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Ooooh, I'll go for this :)

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#6 OFFLINE Jinky

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I'm doing this because I find it hard to stick to one save for more than say a week. If I have a thread and (hopefully) followers I think I will be more motivated to stick to the game. We'll see. First time for me though so don't expect great shakes. :happy:

#7 OFFLINE Cearlan

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This site and most of the other FM sites I have been on have good stories on them, but the range from simple regurgitation of facts 'n' stats from their save, or are proper stories, with three dimensional qualities attached, to varying degrees depending on the ability of the writer. But there are no, or very few, stories that deal with the darker side of humanity. the frailty, the personality flaws that we all have to a greater or lesser extent. I am currently putting a story together featuring an unemployed ex-Italian international starting his managerial career.

In the background post I reference several personal failings and demons the character carries through to the present day. I wanted to present it as a real, down and dirty story where he has to challenge similar flaws in his players, Think of a manager who is a former alcoholic being faced with a player heading down the same path. I am aware of some of the sensitive personalities that may access the story and read something in the story that is not there, for example it is ok to drink, take drugs and so forth.

So my question is should I continue to make it dark, or maybe tone it down a bit so as to be more PC? Or to put it another way, can I assume that the members here are adult and self aware or do I tone it down to suit?

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Take Care,

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#8 OFFLINE Saintmat

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View PostCearlan, on 21 November 2010 - 12:35 AM, said:

So my question is should I continue to make it dark, or maybe tone it down a bit so as to be more PC? Or to put it another way, can I assume that the members here are adult and self aware or do I tone it down to suit?


Well, to be blunt it's up to you. Like you say, the variation in story types based on FM is huge because people have different ways of expressing themselves. If you want to express your story in that fashion then it is up to you. All I ask is that the story should retain the aspect of managing a club as the central theme. I've seen some stories where people clearly fancy themselves as the next J.K. Rowling.

As long as the story is good, and people find it interesting I seriously doubt being non-PC is going to make a difference. If people don't find it too their taste then they won't read it, and if they kick-off then so what?

I look forward to seeing what you come up with. :thup:


#9 OFFLINE NickH

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Right, two months late but the November Story of the Month competitions results are in, the winner was Ippo's Doing It My Way.

So Congratulations to Ippo :thup:

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#10 OFFLINE Pompey_Dan

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Congratulations to Neavsey... his story entitled: "My First Fan Boys Story" was December's SotM winner and will be a "pinned" thread throughout January. Take a bow son! :)

#11 OFFLINE Mackie

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So I take it that this has stopped? :p Was a good idea.


It's come to an end, what a great 8 years it has been, some great people and we will never forget the memories.


#12 OFFLINE The_Bullard

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The guy running it went to Australia.

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#13 OFFLINE Yamo

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I do miss Matt :(

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#14 OFFLINE Big T

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I will take this over for FM12.
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#15 OFFLINE ConorSUFC

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No you won't. :thup:

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View PostConorSUFC, on 05 August 2011 - 11:27 AM, said:

No you won't. :thup:


Why not?
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#17 OFFLINE Superstar

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I'm sure a member of staff will for FM2012

#18 OFFLINE alilane4

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Superstar just volunteered himself, good lad.

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#19 OFFLINE Superstar

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View Postalilane4, on 05 August 2011 - 12:57 PM, said:

Superstar just volunteered himself, good lad.


Maybe when FM2012 comes out I'll have a think about it ;)

#20 OFFLINE kudinspurs

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i will go with this...now!!

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